Petit Poeme en anglais (a corriger) (1)

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Petit Poeme en anglais (a corriger)
Message de himister posté le 06-12-2007 à 20:04:23 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour je dois faire un poeme en anglais pour demain pouvez vous me dire si il y'a des fautes dans ce que j'ai fais:

I want to go with you
But how to leave?
I want to leave you
But how do you say it?
I want to say to you
But do you understand me?
I want to understand the world
But how is it?
I want to be a woman
But it’s a joke
I want joking with you
But you are crying
I don’t want to cry
But it’s natural
I don’t want to be natural
But all are superficial

But I want to travel the world with you
Can you accept?
And I want to be happy with you
Can you accept?
And I want to live with you
Can you accept?
And I want to fight the life with you
Can you accept?
But I'm sure you'll accept this slam for me


merci de me corriger^^

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