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Message de binbon posté le 03-05-2009 à 17:39:57 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
Je voudrais savoir si cette lettre est bien rédigée:
Dear Katy,
Do you know Hastings? A big battle took place there.
I'm staying at a very nice british family's house. Every morning, I eat a real english breakfast!
On the road, we stopped at Rye, a lovely little town on the coast.
I enjoyed this stay so much that I wish I'll come back next year!
I hope you're doing well.
Love,
Jen.
Merci beaucoup!
Message de binbon posté le 03-05-2009 à 17:39:57 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
Je voudrais savoir si cette lettre est bien rédigée:
Dear Katy,
Do you know Hastings? A big battle took place there.
I'm staying at a very nice british family's house. Every morning, I eat a real english breakfast!
On the road, we stopped at Rye, a lovely little town on the coast.
I enjoyed this stay so much that I wish I'll come back next year!
I hope you're doing well.
Love,
Jen.
Merci beaucoup!
Réponse: Carte postale Angleterre-Correction de laure95, postée le 03-05-2009 à 18:01:40 (S | E)
Bonjour, voici ce que tu dois corriger:
Dear Katy,
Do you know Hastings? A big battle took place there.
I'm staying at a very nice british family's
On the road, we stopped at Rye, a lovely little town on the coast.
I enjoyed (présent: tu y es toujours, non?) this stay so much that I wish I'll come back (j'aimerais: I would like to + infinitif ou I wish I + preterit) next year!
I hope you're doing well.
Love,
Jen.
