Let's Suggest/34

Let's Suggest/34
Message de here4u posté le 11-03-2023 à 17:00:48 (S | E | F)
Hello, dear workers!

Here is the new topic for you to write about. I hope many will participate enthusiastically, and that you'll do it as well as ever...

You mustn't be afraid of making mistakes... We LOVE mistakes, because they give us an opportunity to explain and correct!

Here is today's topic:
Write about the first two items of your bucket list... (130 to 150 words)
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Voici le rappel des modalités de la première partie de l'exercice :
1. Je vous demande une EXPRESSION sur le sujet proposé à m’envoyer en mp dès que possible …
2. Le plus tôt possible, cette première expression sera publiée sur le Forum, et CHACUN sera libre de « corriger » UNE FOIS ( en collant le texte et indiquant les erreurs EN BLEU, et en soulignant ce qui vous semble maladroit et que vous voudriez changer, sans donner la « correction » (forme correcte), à ce moment là, comme il se doit.) Si un autre membre a déjà indiqué des erreurs en bleu, VOUS DEVEZ repartir de cette correction et la confirmer ou la corriger... Un seul devoir à la fois sera publié pour corriger… Vous pourrez ensuite donner vos suggestions de correction (en vert!)

IMPORTANT ! Pour me faciliter le transfert des corrections successives de vos travaux sur le site, pourriez vous m'indiquer par un "(" le mot ou segment de phrase qui devrai(en)t être modifié(s), s'il vous plaît ?
ie. (I'm repeating for years... ou (was not only to want something,... Pourquoi ? Simplement parce que le site ne "garde" pas les indications de couleurs ou de soulignement etc. dès que l'on copie... Donc, je prends vos travaux, je les corrige avec les codes "bleu" ou "souligné" ou "vert", mais au moment où je vous poste la correction, je perds tout mon travail... et dois tout refaire mot à mot en direct avec deux fenêtres ou même deux écrans pour un travail fastidieux de copie point par point... Merci de votre aide !

Les modalités complètes sont accessibles sur le lien suivant :
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( Je vous les rappellerai au fur et à mesure de la progression du travail )
Cet exercice sera ... ce que vous en ferez : ou ou ** Do your best, I trust You!
Correction en ligne le samedi 25 mars 2023.
J'attends vos envois en mp et publierai le premier dès que possible.

MAY THE FORCE BE WITH YOU and with US!

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Réponse : Let's Suggest/34 de here4u, postée le 13-03-2023 à 11:25:34 (S | E)
Hello dears!

Here we go for a new Let's Suggest!- You know you can help us...

EXPRESSION N°1: please, indicate possible mistakes in blue and underline what you consider is clumsy...

My bucket list has evolved with each passing day.
When I was eighteen, the first item of my wishes was to travel around Europe; and I did it, with some good friends, during several summer holidays. We went, backpacking, hitchhiking or taking the train when we had enough money. We slept in youth-hostels or in people's houses in exchange for a little work.
That's how I visited London and many other capital- towns.It gave me the opportunity to discover other ways of life and wonderful people.It was in Berlin, in 1961, that I met the man of my life.❤️..but that's another story!
I added an item at the beginning of this year, and it will be my second one. It's very simple and doesn't require any special skills or expenses.I just want to spend many quality times with my loved-ones, so that they will have happy, tender and sweet images when I leave this world forever! 160 words

for your help!

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Réponse : Let's Suggest/34 de here4u, postée le 15-03-2023 à 18:35:15 (S | E)
Hello dears!

No volunteers... I'll do it!

EXPRESSION N°1: please, indicate possible mistakes in blue and underline what you consider is clumsy...

My bucket list has evolved with each passing day.
When I was eighteen, the first item of my wishes was to travel around Europe; and I did it, with some good friends, during several summer holidays. We went, backpacking, hitchhiking or taking the train when we had enough money. We slept in youth-hostels or in people's houses in exchange for a little work.
That's how I visited London and many other capital- towns.It gave me the opportunity to discover other ways of life and wonderful people.It was in Berlin, in 1961, that I met the man of my life.❤️..but that's another story!
I added an item at the beginning of this year, and it will be my second one. It's very simple and doesn't require any special skills or expenses.I just want to spend many quality times with my loved-ones, so that they will have happy, tender and sweet images when I leave this world forever! 160 words


Green allowed now! and EXPRESSION N°2 will be posted tomorrow morning.

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Réponse : Let's Suggest/34 de amalia80, postée le 15-03-2023 à 19:08:12 (S | E)
EXPRESSION N°1: please, suggestions.

My bucket list has evolved with each passing day.
When I was eighteen, the first item of my wishes was to travel around Europe; and I did it, with some good friends, during several summer holidays. We went, backpacking, hitchhiking or taking the train when we had enough money. We slept in youth-hostels or in people's houses in exchange for a little work.
That's how I visited London and many other (capital cities in Europe.It gave me the opportunity to discover other ways of life and wonderful people.It was in Berlin, in 1961, that I met( the man who shares my life .❤️..but that's another story!
I added an item at the beginning of this year, and it will be my second one. It's very simple and doesn't require any special skills or expenses.I just want to spend ( as much time as possible with my loved-ones, so that they will have happy, tender and sweet images when I leave this world forever! 160 words

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Réponse : Let's Suggest/34 de here4u, postée le 16-03-2023 à 09:21:02 (S | E)
Hello dears,

Here is EXPRESSION N°2please, indicate possible mistakes in blue and underline what you consider is clumsy...

This’s a difficult question. I’m not adventurer: i don’t want to swim with dolphins nor go to walk near alligators in florida… I don’t want to cross a suspended bridge or bungee jumping or scuba diving in turquoise seas…I like watching the sky the night. I always did and now, i will like to see the aurora borealis in Island. I have gone there already, but have not seen one and I was deceived.
But that I want to do more is to see my kids becoming adult and succeed in life. They are small now, but the time is passing so quickly and I want to be a good parent and help them so much than possible. I want they get a good job and to be good people. 135 words

for your help!

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Réponse : Let's Suggest/34 de amalia80, postée le 17-03-2023 à 17:47:54 (S | E)
Hello dears,

Here is EXPRESSION N°2 please, indicate possible mistakes in blue and underline what you consider is clumsy...

This's a difficult question. I'm not x adventurer: (i don't want to swim with dolphins ( nor ( go to walk near alligators in ( florida I don't want to cross a ( suspended bridge or x bungee jumping or scuba diving in turquoise seas?I like watching the sky ( the night . I always ( did and now, (i will like to see the aurora borealis in Island. I (have gone there already , but ( have not seen one and I was deceived.
But that I want to do ( more is to see my kids' becoming adult and succeed in life. They are small now, but ( the the time is passing so quickly and I want to be a good parent and help them (so much than possible. I want ( they get a good job and to be good people. 135 words

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Réponse : Let's Suggest/34 de here4u, postée le 17-03-2023 à 22:32:11 (S | E)
Hello!

Green allowed.

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Réponse : Let's Suggest/34 de here4u, postée le 19-03-2023 à 09:41:35 (S | E)
Hello!

No suggestions? Nobody wants to help? Come on! We need you!

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Réponse : Let's Suggest/34 de amalia80, postée le 19-03-2023 à 10:46:00 (S | E)
Hello dears,

Here is EXPRESSION N°2 suggestions..

This's a difficult question. I'm not ( an adventurer: (I don't want to swim with dolphins ( or walk near alligators in (FloridaI don't want to cross a ( suspended bridge or (go bungee jumping or scuba diving in turquoise seas.I like watching the sky ( at night . I (ve always done it , (I would like to see the aurora borealis in Island. I (have already been there , but (I didn't see any and I was deceived.
But that I want to do ( the most is to see my kids' becoming adults and succeed in life. They are small now, but ( time is passing so quickly and I want to be a good parent and help them (as much as possible. I want (them to have a good job and to be good people. 135 words

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Réponse : Let's Suggest/34 de here4u, postée le 20-03-2023 à 10:07:27 (S | E)
Hello dears,

Here is EXPRESSION N°2: just a little help...

This's a difficult question. I'm not an adventurer: I don't want to swim with dolphins or walk near alligators in Florida. I don't want to cross a suspended bridge or go bungee jumping or do scuba diving in turquoise seas. I like watching the sky at night. I've always done it, (I would like to see the aurora borealis in Island. I have already been there, but I didn't see any and I was deceived.
But that I want to do the most is to see my kids' becoming adults and succeed in life. They are small now, but time is passing so quickly and I want to be a good parent and help them as much as possible. I want them to have a good job and to be good people. 135 words


I hope it will help!

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Réponse : Let's Suggest/34 de amalia80, postée le 20-03-2023 à 11:04:23 (S | E)
Hello dears,

Here is EXPRESSION N°2: .

This is a difficult question. I'm not an adventurer: I don't want to swim with dolphins or walk near alligators in Florida. I don't want to cross a suspended bridge or go bungee jumping or do scuba diving in turquoise seas. I like watching the sky at night. I've always done it, (I would like to see ( aurora borealis in( Iceland . I have already been there, but I didn't see any and I was (disappointed.
But( what I want I want to do most is to see my kids becoming adults and succeed in life. They are small now, but time is passing so quickly and I want to be a good parent and help them as much as possible. I want them to have a good job and to be good people. 135 words

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Réponse : Let's Suggest/34 de here4u, postée le 21-03-2023 à 10:07:29 (S | E)
Hello!

EXPRESSION N°3: please, indicate possible mistakes in blue and underline what you consider is clumsy...

Yes, I’m sure I can write a long bucket list…. There’s many things I want to do but I haven’t time and money enough.
First, i want to go to norway and go to youth hostel because the hotels are so expansive . In norway, i will take a boat and admired fjords in the south. I know the landscape are beautiful , and that there are beautiful cascades and falls of water making real swimming pools, but they are very very cold. I don’t know if it’s possible to swim in norway. The water is very cold, i think.I will eat fish, specialy salmon and visit places where the salmons grow up.
I like to visit united states too. It’s my country of dreams… i know every thing is big here, i will go in californie and swim in the hot sea. ( much more hot that norway…) californie is sea and sun… a real dream.160 words

for your help!

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Réponse : Let's Suggest/34 de amalia80, postée le 21-03-2023 à 13:23:23 (S | E)
EXPRESSION N°3: please, indicate possible mistakes in blue and underline what you consider is clumsy...

Yes, I’m sure I can write a long bucket list…. There ('s many things I want to do but I haven’t(time and money enough
First,( i want to go to (norway and go to( youth hostel because( the hotels are (so expansive . In ( norway,( i will take a boat and (admired fjords in the south. I know the (landscape are beautiful , and that there are beautiful falls of water making real swimming pools, but they are very very cold. I don’t know if it’s possible to swim in (norway . The water is very cold,(i think.I will eat fish, (specialy salmon and visit(places where the (salmons grow up.
I (like to visit( united states too. It’s(my country of dreams …(i know( every thing is big here,(i will go in (californie californie and swim in(the hot sea. (much more hot that( norway …)(californie is sea and sun… a real dream.160 words

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Réponse : Let's Suggest/34 de here4u, postée le 22-03-2023 à 21:47:11 (S | E)
Hello!

green allowed tomorrow morning.

EXPRESSION N°4 will be published tomorrow night or on Friday morning.

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Réponse : Let's Suggest/34 de amalia80, postée le 23-03-2023 à 13:04:44 (S | E)
EXPRESSION N°3: suggestios...

Yes, I’m sure I can write a long bucket list…. There ( are a lot of things I want to do but I haven’t( enough time and money
First,(I want to go to (Norway and go to( a youth hostel because hotels are ( too expensive . In (Norway,( I will take a boat and ( admire fjords in the south. I know the landscapes are beautiful , and that there are beautiful falls of water making real swimming pools, but they are very very cold. I don’t know if it’s possible to swim in (Norway. The water is very cold, (Ithink.I will eat fish, ( especially salmon and visit(places where ( salmon grow .
I ( would like to visit( the USA too. It’s my ( dream country …( I know( everything is big here,(I will go to California and swim in( the warm sea. (much warmer than Norway).( California[ is sea and sun… a real dream.160 words

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Réponse : Let's Suggest/34 de here4u, postée le 23-03-2023 à 18:14:36 (S | E)
Hello,

here is EXPRESSION N°4: please, indicate possible mistakes in blue and underline what you consider is clumsy...

When I think of bucket list, the first thing which comes to my mind is my trip to San Francisco.
It was the first time I travelled by plane. Some plane: Airbus 380. I could have hugged the customs officer, when I set my foot on the American soil.
A dream come true. San Francisco lives up to its reputation.
I biked the Golden Gate Bridge, one of the world's wonder! It's enormously photogenic! A real star even when it's playing hide and seek in the fog.
I enjoyed walking and running through the Golden Gate Park and along the coastal trail.
I even drove a Ford Mustang like Steve Mac Queen, down the crookedest street.
I visited the legendary Alcatraz island on a Tour. I enjoyed every part of it.
But don't go to San Francisco, if you love sunbathing or bathing in warm waters. More often than not, it's windy and foggy.(154 words)

Thanks for your help!

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