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Message de hasnacha posté le 14-12-2008 à 18:16:03 (S | E | F)
Bonjour!
Pouvez vous me dire s'il vous plait si j'ai fait des fautes, merci!
First of extract, the geneticst is self-rassured and self-confident, because Maria and Antonio are nervous. In fact of Maria is uncomfortable because she would prefer not to be there. She is facing a dilemma. In the second part of extract, the geneticist is professional because he wants rassured them about of to have a child by genetic, by cell selection.
merci
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Modifié par bridg le 14-12-2008 18:57
Message de hasnacha posté le 14-12-2008 à 18:16:03 (S | E | F)
Bonjour!
Pouvez vous me dire s'il vous plait si j'ai fait des fautes, merci!
First of extract, the geneticst is self-rassured and self-confident, because Maria and Antonio are nervous. In fact of Maria is uncomfortable because she would prefer not to be there. She is facing a dilemma. In the second part of extract, the geneticist is professional because he wants rassured them about of to have a child by genetic, by cell selection.
merci
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Modifié par bridg le 14-12-2008 18:57
Réponse: Correction of extract de jean31, postée le 14-12-2008 à 21:27:41 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
En rouge ce qu'il faut corriger ou supprimer.
Les points d'exclamation jaunes signalent les omissions.
En vert quelques corrections.
First of extract, the geneticist is self-rassured and self-confident, because Maria and Antonio are nervous. In fact of Maria is uncomfortable because she would prefer not to be there. She is facing a dilemma. In the second part of extract, the geneticist is professional because he wants reassured them about of to having a child by genetics, by cell selection.