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Message de soleil posté le 2004-12-03 11:37:15 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour pouvez-vous me corriger svp?
Merci
Tim,21, is a young man who must go to the war to Vietnam. But he shrinks from this war. He no wants to the war. During a fishing, his friend called Elroy hopes Tim will get round to fishing out. But Tim is feared. Elroy has pity and he is sorrowed because Tim lacks courage.
After a night, Tim leaves home but no thanks Elroy.
Merci beaucoup
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Modifié par soleil le 03-12-2004 12:01
Bonjour pouvez-vous me corriger svp?
Merci
Tim,21, is a young man who must go to the war to Vietnam. But he shrinks from this war. He no wants to the war. During a fishing, his friend called Elroy hopes Tim will get round to fishing out. But Tim is feared. Elroy has pity and he is sorrowed because Tim lacks courage.
After a night, Tim leaves home but no thanks Elroy.
Merci beaucoup
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Modifié par soleil le 03-12-2004 12:01
Réponse: re:correction de salsify, postée le 2004-12-03 13:02:47 (S | E)
Salut !
Je vais essayer de te corriger.
Tim,21, is a young man who must go to the war to Vietnam.
But he shrinks from going to this war. (to shrink from doing something --> répugner à faire quelque chose; dans ce cas il rechigne à partir à la guerre)
He doesn't agree with the war. (dans ce cas, je dirais qu'il n'est pas d'accord avec cette guerre, plutôt que de dire qu'il n'en veut pas)
During a fishing party, his friend (called) Elroy hopes Tim will get round to fishing out. (Called n'est pas utile à mon avie)
But Tim is afraid. (avoir peur se dit 'to be afraid' et être éffrayé se dit 'to be scared')
Elroy has pity and he feels sad because Tim lacks courage. (avoir de la peine se dit 'to feel sad')
After a night, Tim leaves home but doesn't thank Elroy.
Attention ! Si tu souhaites mettre un verbe à la forme négative, penses à utiliser l'auxiliaire 'do'
ex: I don't run; He doesn't like
J'espère avoir pu t'aider.
Bon courage !
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